One adjective is enough. Stacking them is redundant and unnecessary. What do I mean? Like this:
Eugene caught a big, huge fish.
“I made a dumb, stupid mistake,” Todd sighed.
Calico came to live with me when she was a tiny, little kitten.
The ice cream shop had 31 various, different flavors.
See how much stronger those sentences sound without the superfluous adjectives?
Eugene caught a huge fish.
“I made a stupid mistake,” Todd sighed.
Calico came to live with me when she was a tiny kitten.
The ice cream shop had 31 different flavors.
Just stack your pancakes from now on. Ha!
I’m pleased to announce the release of my 8th book, Skoll’s Diary.
Africans and African Americans left Earth in 1900, and went to another planet in The Milky Way to escape mistreatment…
It’s now the year 3005 on that terraformed planet. We get a peek into…
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Blood Isn’t Thicker Than Ink https://seanarchy.wordpress.com/2019/08/23/blood-isnt-thicker-than-ink/ via @Seanarchy
Title:A Gathering of Butterflies
Author: Sean C. Wright
Genre: Short stories
Only $2.99 in ebook form.Get the book here.
4 tales of steely but vulnerable women of color will melt your heart while lifting your spirits…
A fierce grandmother keeps her grandson from the clutches of Old Scratch in Devil Does Dallas.
An alien abduction transforms a large, miserable woman in Hazel Hogan.
A country girl meets a city girl on her birthday, and struggles to decide if the girl’s heart is dark or light in Bubble Bath Twelve.
And methodical Genie forms an unlikely relationship in Heaven’s Halfway House while in a coma.
This was the first book in this series I read. I intend to read the others.
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